Commander up close and personal.
We have a new horse on the ranch and I am really excited. My PawPaw bought him the other day. The horse is a gelding. His name is Commander, but my PawPaw says that he will have to prove himself worthy of his name. Commander is very powerful and strong. I have never seen such muscles on a horse before.
Commander is a red horse with a black mane and tail. He has white stockings on three of his feet. He has a white stripe going down on his face. He has beautiful coloring.
This horse will be good for roping. I cannot wait to go on a pleasure trail ride with him. He will also be good at any ranch work. We are going to put him to work.
Today my PawPaw is riding Commander. My grandma, sister, brother, and I are going to ride with him on different horses. I cannot wait until my turn to 
ride Commander. When I do, I will let you know how he does for me.
He is a good-looking horse. Will you tell us about it when you have a turn riding him?
Today was my birthday!
Happy Birthday!
Hi Jake,
I am very impressed by your site. You are a very good writer. As a person who does not ride horses, you explained things very well. I’m very proud of you.